Colour colour colour...

I was so fed up with the dullness of my sites...that my reasons for my brilliantly colourful canopy and pink walls is to brighten up my dull sites......I love colourful gardens and colour makes people happy, it is like the sun...the light reflections create a cheerful mood..and pink or...Jamie's suggestion of cerise shows the green of any plants off in a spectacular way....I am sticking to my bright pink but Dear potential client...you can have any colour you like!

 lol

crit 13th Jan 2014 pre final hand in.

 

 

 

 

 

Pin up yesterday, amendments needed........

Plans: Key too large on plan...I think needs re-colouring too, Colour some buildings for context, why pink walls? Julia asked...because the contrast with green is intense. Canopy looks like it is plonked....may change the shape...for the better I hope...Text font and size need to change.

 

 

 

 

Sections of Mint Street:Ground line needs to be thicker and section should be whole length of A1

Sections for Crossbones:Maybe turn this section 90 degrees, I am going to re colour these and drop the backgrounds

 

Sketch perspectives: Pleased with these, maybe add fruiting trees, need 4 more sequences to make up a full walk through of the parks

Precedents/Mood board: Leave spaces around some pics, find out where the pictures are of....change, add maybe...still only 7 though...

 

Quite pleased with my feedback overall, I know what I have to do to improve, I just don't have a lot of time to do it...working tomorrow and Thursday so I only really have 3 days to do it all....arrrrgghhhh

 shame as it could be so much better....